And gently the curtain falls,
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The show unfinished,
What am I waiting for? The intermedi?
Ah! If life were so far as to to grant us one,
This baroque would be but bearable.
I try and open my eyes,
The tears falling as surely as the warm water from the shower head…
I’ll be fine.
Lovely poem. The defining moments of life can be spectacular albeit sometimes harsh.
Thank You Eric!
Very nicely written. Very nice.
I really like this one!
Too cute!
🙂
Thank You! You are too kind!
Hugssssssssss 🙂
Alan:
You are very kind. Thank you 🙂
I’ve missed Hamish 🙂
Chriz:
I wait for the dizziness to pass and then get on the roller coaster again!
Gary:
Thank you! Just one of those phases ya know.. I’ll bounce back soon!
Lovely, Archie. Really lovely. You have the soul of a poet.
Very nice!One of those pensive days?
BEAUTIFUL!!
What has put you into such a somber mood Archie? I hope all is well.
“The tears falling as surely as the warm water from the shower head…”
Loved this. Very vivid. You write so well. I came here from Apar’s.
Thanks Laksh! Hug Apar for me 🙂
and what happens after the break?
Indeed! My life’s full fo them and I can’t seem to get enough! 🙂
Thank You for stopping by…
Your name rings a bell as well, I can’t quite place it 🙂
Times when an event or a phase draw to a close are overwhelming! I call them defining moments of life!